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Reviews for The Science of Seduction

By : aineko
  • From ANON - ash on September 26, 2013
    very very very good. it was written very well and seemed natural
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on March 10, 2013
    Wow, fantastic, fantastic story. Like the other reviewer, I just sat and read this all in one go tonight (I've just tonight decided to check out Sherlock fanfic in fact) and I have to say, I feel like you captured the characterization of both John and Sherlock really well. And I liked the epilogue, because it is fluffy, but not out of character especially for how you developed them, with John still unsure what to make of the situation. (This actually caused a fight with my loving husband, believe it or not -- after I mentioned the story and how most people in the world aren't 100% straight or gay no matter what they claim to be, he doesn't believe me... le sigh, oh well.) I hope you continue writing, and if it's a sequel to this story so much the better. Cheers! ~LG
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  • From pftb on March 09, 2013
    hi.

    i read this whole thing in one sitting. and it was really amazing. i was ready to name streets and cities after you, erect (yes erect) monuments and have you declared sainted by the catholic community. it was by far the greatest story i have ever read, be it fanfiction, published, whatever. and no, i'm not blowing smoke up your ass. it was as if you had gone into my brain and found everything i ever wanted to have cumulate between the two and wrote it out in the most perfect way possible. and then when i got to the epilogue and it said "fluff" i really could have died and gone to heaven right then and there and sworn on a stack of bibles that i had lived a full life.

    UNTIL. i read the epilogue. and everything in me flatlined. i was/am so horribly disappointed. not in your writing, please understand, i love your writing. i would have gone out and promoted you and everything you write for free just because i believe that the world needs to know you exist. but i so DESPERATELY wanted this to end in declarations of love, or at least becoming an relationship! not just further unsureness and hesitancy and john deciding tentatively that he will think about them maybe being fuckbuddies. really? after all that, that's how you wanted it to end? i am so heartbroken. i could cry.

    please dont hate me for writing this. i know in the grand scheme of things my opinion means a load of shit and i really dont want you to read this and thing i'm bashing you or anything like that. and i should probably seek psychiatric treatment for being so emotionally invested in fanfiction in the first place, i'm aware. so, i'm sorry for imposing my opinion upon you. just... i guess if you ever feel like writing a post-epilogue to this story that ends in ACTUAL fluff, them realizing they're madly in love and deciding to be together forever (you know what i mean), please let me know. i truly believe that, even a teeny tiny short post-epilogue of that kind my cure my all encompassing, mind numbing black cloud of depression that i have seeped into.

    thanks. again, i'm sorry i felt the need to write this. i truly am. i know, like molly, that i dont really count.

    sincerely
    prey4thebeast
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  • From KotoriSensei on January 29, 2013
    Sherlock touching himself in the bathroom...must be one of the most erotic images in the word...
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  • From KotoriSensei on January 29, 2013
    Nice start! Sexy start! >///
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  • From ANON - MissD.E on December 29, 2012
    I absolutely loved it! Such an interesting plot and great smut! Briliant!
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  • From ANON - Raveluki on October 06, 2012
    I love the lead up in this story! You created such amazing tension between the charectors, and it was incredibly hot whenever one of them had to "take matters into their own hand."
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