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Reviews for Naughty & Nice

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Em on November 13, 2013
    I'm not a Bible expert or anything but doesn't the Bible say Adam and Eve were the first and only human adults God ever created out of nothing? So Adam and Eve and their children and so on would be responsible for populating the Earth, which means that everyone in the world is Adam and Eve's offspring. Distant offspring but still. Meaning everyone IS related by blood, distant or not, so by Helen's standards, she is related to everyone in the world and everyone in the world is related to her. I wonder what Helen would think if she realized that...

    Anyway, I did love the story!
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  • From ANON - Hannah Staiger on May 26, 2013
    Great story! I love the detail that you use in every little aspect of Hotch and Reid's lives. I encourage you to publish more! I check everyday to see if the story has continued. I think that the wedding should be soon and that for once Hotch can be put into danger. It would be nice to see how Reid would process it. Keep up the good work!
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  • From M_elle_22 on April 18, 2013
    OMG. What an explosive two chapters. Blowing his Mother's mind and then blowing Reid's, lol.

    Helen... is awful. Loved that Reid wasn't at all mousy about his response to her hatred. He responded swiftly and quite rightfully to her prejudice. Her history of disliking of anything different than herself clearly indicates there would be no winning her over, ever. Its amazing she has two sons who are as wonderful as they are!

    The Brooks ex-in-laws were interesting. They didn't show much of a reaction in any way. I wonder where you will take this next? They obviously will have to support their daughter, but maybe they will be a welcome reasonable voice. I do feel that they liked Reid, or at least didn't pronounce him as good as being on hell's doorstep.

    Hotch was amazing. Defending his fiance, but not being an ass about it. He kept calm and aware of his son, while Haley and her sister had a real hard time staying on the right side of behaving like harpies.

    I really wish we could have seen them at the dinner at Rossi's. Would love to see them tease Reid, maybe Rossi giving Hotch and Reid a sincere congratulatory look at getting past a significant hurdle in Reid's recover.

    But yeah. Morgan and Garcia would definitely enjoy picking on Reid.
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  • From ANON - delia cerranov on April 16, 2013
    Yes it was...naughty and nice.
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