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Reviews for Bite

By : rae_roberts
  • From ANON - Jewel on October 23, 2014
    I have to say that i've really enjoyed your story. I also have to say that you have sooooo totally left the ending open to continue. i am really hoping that you do. And i don't mean "Interlude", which was good in it's own right. That scene may come later from this one. I'm so surprised at how much i enjoyed this alternate world. I feel that having Dean compare the new world to his own world intermittently through out the story is a good way of giving the reader background on the new world without having an information "tell" all at once at the beginning of the story. It also serves to remind the reader that it IS another world if the reader starts thinking that characters are "out of character". Which I don't. like Dean I actually enjoy seeing who the people from his world are in this world.

    I find the werewolf thing, the cursed ring and the nature of alpha/submissive a perfect way for the not-brothers to have intercourse that makes sense. i love that Sam actually says one that it's not about sexual orientation, its about dominance. I thought you handled the first time, non-con for Dean, very tactfully. Having Dean in that scene make it clear this is not what he wanted to happen but being level headed about it, along with Sam being a little sympathetic and trying to make it as easy for dean as possible, made the whole non-con thing very palatable and sexy in someways. nice job there.

    I suppose the only real criticism I have is the lack of lube throughout their time together. I feel the reader gets the impression that sex with men is something that Sam is familiar with and I thought he might be the kind of guy who is prepared. If not the first time, because it was really unexpected, but definitely from then on, esp since he seemed concerned with Dean's comfort. I would have thought Sam would have gotten some right away and would be sure to have it on him at all times considering the frequency with which the curse demanded they be intimate. and oh - forgot to mention it above - i love the whole "knotting" thing. not exactly sure how that physically works, not sure that i really need to know, but love the concept.

    As said, i would love to see this continued. Thank you for writing and posting.
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  • From ANON - Amyethyst on September 04, 2014
    I really loved this fic. I liked the detail you out into it. But I got to say, I feel like the end was a let down. But all and all super good.
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  • From ANON - valerie on May 17, 2014
    I just read the latest chapter and thought it was very good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2014
    I love the wincest and Sub!Dean the most. This story combines them both.
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