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Reviews for Gaius and his mind control potion

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From Jeda26 on October 24, 2016

    Hello, having perused the Merlin Archive in a while, due to the lack of new stories, I was pleasantly surprised to come across your latest offering. It is absolutely brilliant story with one of the most ingenious and intriguing plots that I have ever come across and it is great to see Gaius making use of his vast knowledge and magical ability to bring all these gorgeous girls under his control as he has his wicked way with them.

    The only other merlin girl, that I can think of that you might want to do a scene with is Lady Elena from the season 3 Changeling episode, but not sure as to how you might fit her in. Maybe she comes to Camelot to renew her father's treaty with the new king and stays over the weekend, giving Gaius his chance at her.

    Can't wait to see what happens, when Gaius finally gets his hands on the true goal of all his endeavours so far, the extraordinary beauty that is the Lady Morgana and how he deals with her spirited, but ultimately futile resistance, as she is unable to prevent herself become Gaius willing lover and slut. 

    At the end, once Morgana is under Gaius’s complete control would to see you do a scene where Gaius decides to bring Arthur under his control, so that the King cannot interfere with him fucking his sister and wife, whenever he wants as well as giving him absolute power over Camelot itself. To further humiliate a powerless Arthur and to demonstrate how much the girls are under his spell, he makes him watch as he fucks Morgana and Gwen in front of them, as the girls make various protestations of love and encouragement as they beg Gaius to impregnate them with his seed, which eagerly does. After that he commands Arthur and Morgana to kinkily incestuous couple and make love to each other as he watches, while his slut Gwen eagerly sucks his cock


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  • From freelunch on August 17, 2016

    Thank you for the new chapter.

    Princess Mithian is hot! Don't mind having her around for a bit.

    And it looks like you've got some interesting plans brewing on how to take down Nimueh. And I'm sure Morgana is going to be quite a handful to deal with when she comes into the story. For me, I just enjoy it more when there is a bit of a power struggle first before Gaius manages to bring the girls to heel.


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  • From ANON - Sncol on August 16, 2016

    >_> Uhhh, storyline huh....

    1) Legend of the seeker-Zedd have fun with Kahlan during the journey behind Richard's back. Kahlan can't have physical contact without her power surging up though there is a loophole for that. Kahlan and the person(in this case, Richard) have to have "real love" for Richard to be not affected by Kahlan's power but she doesn't knows that. Zedd, the wizard, knows about it though. Zedd choose to not helps them because Zedd wants Kahlan all himselfby tricking Kahlan that Zedd knows a spells to get loophole but its "long process" which that case Zedd have his way with her though Kahlan is a bit reluctant about it. Zedd casts a spell on Kahlan can only take pleasure from Zedd and not anyone else though Kahlan did not know it.

    2)PotC-I guess sometimes after Liz's baby was born, one of the British soldiers found her and threatens her by sending out message to British unless Liz do his bidding or whatever.

    3)Last one-I don't know anything about this show but I guess a typical unpopular character wants all of the girls himself by any means like blackmail and such.


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  • From ANON - Sncol on August 16, 2016

    Is it okay to post requests here? I will try to not to ask for a lot of requests since I know you are busy enough as it is. I will post 3 requests and you can pick any one of those requests that you might have interested in. If you don't have any interested in any of those requests then oh well for me lol.

    1) Legend of the Seeker-Kahlan/Zedd

    2)Pirates of the Caribbean-Elizabeth Swann:The one with end of the At World's End when Will have to do his duty as soul harvesting or whatever the duty is and Liz will stay and wait for him for 10 years (I think). I don't know who can you pair her with.

    3)Victorious:Thing is I don't know anything about this show but I thought most girls from the show are hot. You probably don't want to do this since I don't know any thing about the show.


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2016

    Awesome chapter as per usual, glad to see my favorite story back! Excited to see what comes next, hoping that there will be an orgy or atleast a Nimueh/Morgause/Morgana threesome at the end to finish off such an awesome story! Hoping we see a bit of magic use by the witches during sex too! Can't wait for more!


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  • From ANON - Sncol on August 16, 2016

    I like your stories. I was wondering if you could post a chapter where Gaius fucked Gwen in front of Arthur by drinking potion that forces him into deep sleep or potion that can trick Arthur's mind that they are not there in front of him when they actually are.

    Also, I was wondering if you have your own personal website you post stories or do you only post stories on this site? Do you do requests or only tv shows you are fan of?


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  • From freelunch on July 10, 2016

    I'm just glad this story is not abandoned.


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  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    Any plans to update this? Absolutely love it and would love to see more! Hope you get a chance to write more, even if it was just the final chapter with Morgana!


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  • From ANON - freelunch on November 12, 2015
    I saw what you said on the review section in your Chuck story about what happened to your computer. Thanks for not giving up on this story. I really can't wait for the future installments with Nimueh and Morgana. I love it when powerful women fall!
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  • From joey888 on October 01, 2015
    Just want to say that this story is truly brilliant.

    Can't wait for more chapter if you have the chance to write them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2015
    Thanks for the review Merlin, just glad to hear you're still around. Take all the time you need though! Excited for more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2015
    Hope this one gets more! Nice to see some non-Merthur on AFF. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Galer on March 03, 2015
    Hope you haven't given up on this one! Really enjoyed it. Would recommend a meet up of a few more of the girls at some point. Maybe a finale chapter =D
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  • From Laughykid on December 29, 2014
    Well this was a surprise to see! Truly thought you'd abandoned ship. Glad to see it back! As for the chapter, I did like it, however it felt slightly too similar. I feel like you need to diversify whats happening in the chapters a bit more, as they're starting to feel similar. Add some kinks (Anal, Bit more Girl/Girl, etc.). Another big thing is Magic. I'm surprised that you haven't made Gaius make a girl use it for sex (He does complain about stamina all the time)! Other than that, can't wait for more, hope to see you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Darkwid on October 29, 2014
    I hope you haven't given up on this! It's been a while and I'm hoping there's more. It's an awesome story so far!!
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