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Reviews for Lost Boys

By : Turkaholic
  • From ANON - MikoMido on April 02, 2015
    If I ever could recommend reading a work of fan fiction that sounded exactly as the characters should, it would be this.
    I'm constantly finding myself hearing the characters in their own voices as I'm reading; I have to remind myself that this actually didn't air on TV. It's a damn near perfect representation of Ten, Jack, and The Master... I'm itching to read more and more. It's bloody fantastic and I couldn't give it any higher praise than I already have. 10 stars for Lost Boys.
    Please, please continue the story!!! :)
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  • From WonderMint on March 18, 2015
    This is fantastic so far! Just the right mix of surrender and resistance, and the way you linger over each impression and feeling intensifies the action perfectly. I wouldn't have thought I like the "pairing" but the story sells itself! And almost seems to make a little more sense than the canon, eh? XD

    Having Jack and The Doctor eatch the story as a memory is particularly interesting. That's taking non-linear storytelling to a Whovian level, and I like it as both a way to break up the main action and a way to add further footnotes to it. And Jack is also pretty cool, so like, good choice there. It's also added a level of dramatic and presentational polish that takes the piece from a what-happened plot bunny to a really meaningful character development arc. The emotions at play are really stunning and they're conveyed well enough to invoke empathy despite their complexity, and that only adds to the arousal factor. I'll be reading. ^^
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  • From ANON - Jo on March 06, 2015
    This story is brilliant. It's so hard to write sex scenes really well and you manage to do it. It's so hot! And it's great to set it on the Valiant which is sexy anyway as the Master has taken control. Plus the flashback element with Jack and the Doctor really adds to it.
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  • From shaydshanidepp on November 24, 2014
    OMG! You updated and I missed it all. I laughed at the scratch my nose bit. I love the Master (Simm) and you write him beautifully. I wish we had got to see Ten & the Master on screen more. David and John have good chemistry together. I wish John could have shown up in the Matt Smith era or go toe to toe with Peter Capaldi's Doctor but can't always get what we want. Please update again!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 01, 2014
    Very interesting story. You have a great way of writing and capturing the personality of the characters perfectly. Keep going, I look forward to reading more.
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  • From shaydshanidepp on October 16, 2014
    Thanks for the review! I'm a big Master/Lucy Master/Martha fan and I intend for it to be a Master/Martha/Lucy collection one day. I also love a good bit of m/m and this stlfic is awesome. I hope you plan to continue it one day. I write often and do massive chapter updates when I have a steady internet connection. If AFF had a hide feature or something of the sort I could update more often from the close by McDonald's but I'd rather not. Thanks for your review and keep writing because you do it beautifully!
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