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Reviews for Sarah vs. The Exchange

By : MV007
  • From FreakyDaughter on March 29, 2016
    Don't stop! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on March 26, 2016
    Fucking hot.
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  • From ANON - Des on March 22, 2016
    I see your using the same excuse as itwasmerlin and that Sarah is doing this 'for chuck' lol whatever you say. First off Sarah/casey together eww I think I just threw up in my mouth a bit. Is Sarah going to be attracted to/turned on by every male in this story? Does she actually even care about chuck? I can't see that she does. She hasn't shown any guilt or regret for what she's done so far. Even when she first meant of the assignment the only thing she felt was excitement at the though of being used/fucked by other men. This doesn't actually paint her in a very good light does it? Why is she not protected from possible pregnancies? She knew what she was going to have to do with other men. Did she not think of the repercussions or was she to turned on by lesaux that she didn't care? She didn't think billings and co was going to where condoms did she?
    And what the fuck is up with casey? Yeah Sarah walker is hot as fuck and any man would love to have a go of her. But why is he acting like a schoolboy whose never had sex before it's pathetic. Does he not care about chuck at all? Chuck is one of his best friends and all casey is doing is acting all creepy and trying to get in his girlfriends pants. I was intimacy excited when I seen this story pop up thinking it had potential to be great. But after only 4 chapters it seems pretty ridiculous in places due to all the holes in the plot and how occ your characters are acting.
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  • From BCC1 on March 21, 2016
    Another searingly hot chapter. I for one really like the Casey/Sarah pairing so thank you for this! I hope there's a lot more chances for them to get together one way or another in your future chapters I liked that you included a lot from Casey's thoughts and point of view - very refreshing as usually its always from Sarah's point of view. I see that Chuck could be close! Please please don't rescue him too soon. There's so much potential here and so much that Sarah could be called on to do! Love that she finds herself enjoying these encounters and makes a great alternative to the boring vanilla Chuck sex I normally have to yawn through! Don't waste these opportunities by bringing Chuck back prematurely LOL! I'm not sure why Billings wanted Sarah and Casey to have sex but seriously, I don't care. That they had sex and it was written well is good enough for me :-) The plotline although pretty sparse, serves as a great vehicle for the main sexual events and this is how it should be - I've never yet watched a porn film for the logical storyline! I've actually read numerous Chuck fics where I regard the plotline to be more ridiculous and full of holes and OOC than this. And they never had any hot sex to redeem them! LOL. So...another brilliant chapter and I am so glad that you decided to "pick up a pen" and write this. Can't wait for the next instalment ! Roll on Chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2016
    Sarah is cheating on Chuck no matter how you try to spin it, Casey/Sarah makes no sense, plot holes big enough to fly a plane through
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2016
    But Sarah is doing this to 'rescue' Chuck right? Please....lol

    You write her as attracted to any man that enters her vision
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  • From ANON - JoeBob on March 21, 2016
    Sorry, this isn't my favorite turn. Casey and Sarah together don't do it for me, especially them enjoying it.

    I was looking forward to the battle of wills. So color me disappointed. But it's your story and you should write it however you see. Thanks for the effort.
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  • From ANON - itwasmerlin on March 21, 2016
    havent checked in for a while and get a treat with two chapters of your story . Very good and hot , you write really well . Love that Casey got his haha lucky guy , i can definelty see Chuck as having watched most of this , he wont be happy seeing his gf cumming undone on another mans cock now will he. Looking forward to more
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2016
    So more then likely chuck was watching the whole thing, who are they trying to break? Sarah or chuck? Some things ain't making sense.
    Surely Sarah is on some sort of birth control? She knew she was going on a mission where she was going to be fucking criminals, so she must of known somebody would end up cumming in her? Don't get me wrong the sex was hot, but your plot has more holes then a sieve
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2016
    Well, it is just my opinion, but Casey/Sarah dynamics just does not do it for me. I have read a few stories of them fucking but no matter how dirty they were, it always seemed plain vanilla. Don't get me wrong, I love Chuck and Sarah together, but I also think their sex stories are vanilla. Her getting banged by Lesoux or Billings or any other OMC would have been more hot.

    Sarah getting banged by OMC or characters like Morgan, Lester, Jeff, Manoush, I find hot(but I have rarely read stories starring them). Maybe it is because Yvonne is insanely hot and guys who played these characters are plain average, I find the idea of a hot character banging an average Joe as hot. But, it is just my opinion. You are the author and you know the best. Kudos on your effort in writing a Sarah smut story. I hope one day you will write a Sarah story that has her banging the loser characters of Chuck like Jeff or Lester.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2016
    This has gotten so cringeworthy so fast. The villains are cartoonish and Casey/Sarah are meek little puppets. I'm struggling here to really stay as constructive as possible. Instead of actually showing some agency, their response is to do exactly as the bad guys tell them to. When has that EVER worked (particularly in the show)?

    Is it hot? Very much so, and while that's probably the most important part of any story on here..... man, it's not enough. Maybe this was all your intent, but it really has become laughable, at least whenever you aren't invested in an erotic scene. I'm still paying attention for now, but much in the way you look at a car crash.

    Oh, you also just had Sarah willingly cheat on Chuck. I personally don't care, but it's worth pointing out for this reason. Aside from that being quite a bit OoC (I would argue under any circumstance), I'm guessing you'll also incur the wrath of the Chuck/Sarah zealots that patrol these parts. Hope your reviews don't get spammed again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2016
    Well, if they can see Chuck on their tv it stands to reason that he can see them...
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  • From ANON - Diabloeffect1982 on March 20, 2016
    Nice chapter of why do I get the feeling of that chuck will see Sarah and casey fucking
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  • From ANON - JoeBob on March 13, 2016
    I suspected that the mark would know Sarah was an agent. I'm surprised that he would tip her off so soon. It seems like Sarah playing the sex slave role to find Chuck is now pointless. It'll be interesting to see where this goes.

    Hot chapter.
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on March 10, 2016
    Fuck yeah bro. Love Sarah covered in cum.
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