Reviews for Sweett VictoryBy : Heyoo |
This was a great story! Had me hooked from the first paragraph. I've been wanting to use Donna Sweett in a story for this very reason - dominating Betty. You added in Veronica which was a great idea as well. Loved your wiriting style; it was very clever and perfect characterizations as well.
Now I need to go read the rest of your work!
I do like the idea of this continuing and getting a little fun. Maybe go with Donna meeting Cheryl as she suggested.
Read 3 chapters. Hot stuff, very sexy. Needs some fisting though.
Hope there's more :)
Chap1 super-hot. I hope Betty gets fisted hard sometime.
Good job, I think I can tell whose fics inspired you. Hopefully read more, but only girls please. With vaginal fisting.
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