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Reviews for Seventh Heaven - Family Secrets

By : VGSS
  • From kylielink on July 11, 2010
    loved it, can't wait for more.
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  • From catlady06 on August 20, 2008
    You should continue. I would love to know Mary's reaction.
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  • From SublimelyStupid on March 09, 2007
    okay. i'm not really a big fan of incest but this is one damn good story. you should seriously continue. i will review.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2005
    It's ok, but it would be a whole lot better if you could learn how to use Spell check
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2005
    ...
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  • From ANON - bubblez23 on October 24, 2005
    that..... was......s o.....hot....
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  • From ANON - vgss on March 06, 2005
    I don't get the "actual story format" referrence.

    If you're referring to the spacing, it's not my fault AFF can't handle simple paragraph indentation.

    If you mean collating the chapters into a single story, well then crikey, I normally hit a dozen or so per publishing! From what I've gathered, chaptered submission are for those who write a screen or more in a sitting. Frankly, works > 15kb are worth their own entry, at least.
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  • From ANON - Sky Captain on February 07, 2005
    A threesome is in order...
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  • From ANON - sara on December 31, 2003
    you should continue
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2003
    Plz! comtinue with how mary reacts...this is well writien even though i normally dislitoritories with insest in them.
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  • From ANON - Megasnap on August 02, 2003
    I loved it! Bravo! Excellenitiniting, you're very good at writing this stuff...
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  • From ANON - lordanur on July 28, 2003
    very nice
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  • From ANON - VGSS on July 27, 2003
    Um... *scratches head*

    You did get one thing right, I'm an inexperienced male (duh). If I'd ever had the real thing, why would I be writing about it? *smirk*

    But you're missing the point of the story. Annie finding semen all over her daughter's panties would be a very bad thing if Lucy intended on staying at home. That's why she needed to continually clean up.

    And, as for the squick-factor, what can I say? How damaged are you by reading something offense? Not very, I can imagine. So please let people with off-the-wall fetishes enjoy it the only way possible -- in the safe setting of a fantasy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2003
    Somehow I can tell a man wrote this. I think it's the fact that you seem to think the clitoris somehow protects the vagina and that women somehow need to douche. Do you know about douching at all? Have you consulted an anatomy book ever? Douching is VERY BAD and the vagina is a self cleasing organ. I'd thank you not to refer to female genitals as "pipes" or anyof those ridiculous terms you've made up. Lucy's just been pretty much raped by Simon, he ejaculated in her body and she blows it off with a laugh. The motivations are all wrong here. The characters aren't real in the slightest. This tripe belongs with the other pedo fics on alt.sex.stories.
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  • From ANON - Darklord on July 14, 2003
    Damn, I like this one... I hope you can do more! :-)
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