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Reviews for The Deal

By : LRThunder
  • From ANON - oanya on June 19, 2005
    +Spelling.
    +Grammer.
    +Decent descriptions.
    -Abby is way too OOC.
    -Shitty storyline.
    -Even shittier ending.
    -Tony Marlowe=makes me want to hurl.
    -Abby would NOT wink at McCoy 'naughtily'.

    Rating: 4/10
    It was a dumb fanfic. The only positive thing that I can say is.. you spelled things correctly.
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  • From ANON - HoneyB on July 22, 2004
    All I can say is that reading this story really, REALLY made me want to hit you.



    Hard.
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  • From ANON - Alex W. on February 14, 2004
    I liked the story but I think it would make a little more sense if it were longer.
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  • From ANON - smatha36 on January 27, 2004
    You ended it too soon, will abby & marlowe go on to have kids? Will Abby continue to work; get her practice off the ground? You just can't end it this way write more You've got me hooked.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2003
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2003
    That's all you could think of writing at the moment? Next time save yourself and evreybody else the trouble by not posting it until you have completed a few more chapters!
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