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by Elf

schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would've enjoyed the story a bit more if I understood exactly what the two women did. I'm guessing Crusher maybe fingered Trio (?). Its just confusing the way they're kissing, then suddenly it tells us that a rush of liquid was hitting Crushers hand, and something being supported by her thumb (whatever that means). I can only assume that stuff was accidently left out.
person Satin Jazz Doll
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write, easy and descriptive. It really paints a picture... and *what* a picture it was painting!! *grrr* But you stopped just when it was getting to the good part *grrr* You TEASE!
person C/T-er
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what happened to the rest of the story? :-(
schedule December 23, 2002 at 12:00 AM
About time someone wrote a story with them two! More! More! More!

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