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for Gilmore Girls: Beginnings

by Oric13

person cumin
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please do a sequal to this!! perhaps her 15th birthday! i lOVE LOVE LOVE it when lorelai treats rory like a slut (ie doesn't let her cum, spanks her, takes control, takes pictures)
CONTINUE FOR MY SAKE!
person McKay
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what it says about me that I can picture a lot of this happening...especially the non-sex stuff, you have a good feel for the characters. Not sure I can envision the dirty talk, but the disclaimer does say parody, so...heck, it works for me.
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to do a follow uory ory to this one? like one that plays off of the 15th b-day?
person Acepilot
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very wellttentten, keep going!
person J.M.Wright
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is very vivid and incapturing. As a fan of the Gilmore Girls TV show, and also of lesbian fantasies this was a great stor rea read. The imagination that you have in order to write something or this caliber is just amazing. Please bring out another chapter sometime soon. Please!!!!
person rain1369
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story..........write more!
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this....its really good
person me
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um...it was nice, but I liked your other GG story better thought. Don't know why.
I think you should make a sequel, but with real sex next time. I don't go for girls but I think it's intersting to read.
Have you ever thought about writing a fic with Rory and Jess having sex? With your great skills to write graphic stuff I'm sure it'd REALLY fun to reI woI would most definitely love to read it.
Anyway, update soon. I hope you put some Lorelai/Rory real action next chap. And please, think about writing a Rory/Jess fic, I really hope you do it.

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