rate_review Reviews

All quake before the wrath of the Viper! I mean- try not to go too out of character. You're so out of character you're writing in a completely different genre. Clarkbear? Seriously? Must do better. Dream sequence? Wow. And putting down a description of Clark as 'irritated alien' is just bizarre. But other than that- not too shabby. Hey, am I flaming you? If it feels that way, you're obviously wanting to write better- just because it's fanfiction doesn't mean you can skimp on the basics.

those are their middle names:)

anyway, nice story

Wow, that was such a sweet fic!