rate_review Reviews

First I have to say I read this over the phone to a friend without an internet connection. She'd been a very good girl so I thought I'd reward her with a fic. She requested a Pretender story and I found yours, liked the title, skimmed it to make sure it was worth reading and started.

The chapter titles worked amazingly well and very funny when taken from Jarod's perspective.

We laughed, we sighed, I dumped a bucket of ice water on myself and Mira used it to drool in.

Well done!

i love it. it kept me interested the whole way. keep up the good writing.