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you know, alexander siddig and nana vistor are married? so in a way picturing this happening is *less* disturbing than most live-action (no pun intended) fanfic, but in a way it's even *more* perverted.
anyway, i think this is the best fic in this section. whoot!

I did always think that episode was hot and wondered what would have happened if Julian *had* gone over to Kira's. If I can get past the fact that the actual actors were married (!) to one another, Bashir/Kira is rather hot. They're my favourite characters on the show, anyway. One thing I would say about your story is that I think there should be more action and less dialogue (heck, just take out most of the dialogue) after Julian gets to Kira's quarters. It's a sex scene, not small talk. :) It's an easy mistake to make, but all the "I want you/you're so hot/that's so good" sort of interrupts the flow of the story. I really did like the first part of the story, though, where he's talking about how much he wants to go over to her quarters. *fans self* Whooo!

Oh, by the way, isn't the name of the episode "Fascination", not "Infatuation"? And I think Mrs. Troi's first name is spelled "Lwaxana" with a "w" and one "n" instead of "Luaxanna"u miu might want to check. Anyway. Uber-hot pairing...mmm!