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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start, but you really need a beta, someone who will go through your story and fix the misspellings, and the words that are used incorrectly. Other than that, the idea is nice, and it's decently put together, but there are some very glaring mistakes that make the story hard to read and follow.
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Adorable, verry well wrotten, as alwayse. verry good job! Kudose on cuteness^^
Never stop writting
Faithfully,
Aden
Never stop writting
Faithfully,
Aden