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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Probably a good story, but who wants to plough through that huge block of text? Re-format into paragraphs.
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June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A great fic with plenty of emotional depth and a good balance of spoken and descriptive passages. Your plot and pace are well maintained and I like how well you've kept the girls in character considering subject matter.
Constructively: I would suggest reviewing where the paragraphs start and end, as this could improve the reading flow.
It would be nice to see a follow-up fic as this is an interesting pairing and dynamic.
Constructively: I would suggest reviewing where the paragraphs start and end, as this could improve the reading flow.
It would be nice to see a follow-up fic as this is an interesting pairing and dynamic.
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story! Phoebe and Paige are so good together and I like the fact they did it for comfort.