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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
4; Stopped reading about halfway through this section. The story has some interesting ideas but it doesn't flow well and the mechanics need work. Also the formatting, which hasn't been great got really bad in this chapter. Sorry, but reading this is to much work when the story itself isn't calling me.
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February 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I loved it! It has to be one of my all time fav. fics. I love your writing and I hope you write more soon!^_^