rate_review Reviews

Hot! I love Bashir so much... I want to "play" in his quarters, too!

Excellent as usual. My favorite fanfic author by far! Great adaptations of the characters involved!

ooo.... MORE!!!!! well done for your first *ahem* time! LOL, seriously, you picked up a few tricks from me. Good job! *fans self* wham bam thank you MA'AM!!!!!

Though it was not descriptive enough for my own tastes, that doesn't mean it wasn't good writting. I can't expect everyone to wite the way I do, haha. So I'll just let that one slide. Otherwise, it was rather interesting as a storyline. However, the characters were a bit shallow. No, not their personalities I mean I know who Julian and O'Brian and Quark are by watching the show, so not much description was needed, but the girl really didn't have any depth at all. She was more like a fantasy for Julian than anything else, I couldn't see her as a person. Infatuation with an object is one thing, but a reader of smut like this likes to be able to relate the girl/guy to someone they know or someone they can easily imagine. *shrugs* That's my personal opinin though.

Otherwise, a few grammer and spelling mistakes but there weren't very many and I know you finished it late at night. So yer excused Good job, even though it is just smut.

Nicely done for your first smutty fic. I liked it. Can't wait for chapter 2. You promised!

Hooo boy! I HATE cliffhangers! *glares at author* Good stuff. You have an intriguing plot developing here. Not just a smut piece like originally planned. Can't wait for the next installment.