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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That story made absolutely no sense. First of all, you didn't even explain what Elliot did that was so bad. Then, you immediately jumped to Cragen spanking him instead of anything else. The plotline is ridiculously unbelievable. If a police officer were spanking his detectives, it would leak out instantly, the press would be all over it, and his career would be shot. This story is poorly written, obnoxious, and a pathetic attempt at BDSM made by a novice. Try again.