rate_review Reviews

omg!! yes!! i want more!! you so good!! please post here more!! im in love with it!!

I would just love to see more

I enjoyed the character depictions immensely. The kind playfull chemistry as would be expected was there. My only criticism is that they became less and less like their show characters as the story progressed. What i mean by this is later in your story they seemed less and less like Holly and Val. Your ability to stay in character was the highlight of the first half of the Fic, but it wasn't what they did, but the way they did it that became less and less in character, though they are two characters that would make staying in character difficult to do. I don't think I'd have minded so much if the first half of the Fic hadn't been so perfectly handled making the second less in contrast....

dawnfaith, nobad bad little story. Im crazy about amanda bynes, and I was crazy about jennie garth back when she was on 90210 (still sort of crazy about her), so this pairing is nice. the circumstances of them being "trapped" in the house was a little contrived, to be honest, but the way they got around to doing sex things with scrabble was very clever. your writing style is pretty good too, which is fairly rare in fan fiction. I'll definitely be reading more of your stories.

“Pretty bank robber caught in Scrabble sex orgy.”
that was pretty dam funny