rate_review Reviews

This story is rubish
It is poorly written and Xena would never be overpowered that easily by a stupid warlord
she can beat the god of war in a fight sonshe can easily beat a warlord!!!!

Oh, where to begin? First of all, a few more periods would be nice. ALso, have you heard of quotation marks? THey are those little things that signal that a character is talking. Only one of them can talk per paragraph, and yeah, it was just poorly written. I'm sorry to sound like a bitch here, but it's true. God, this sounded way better than it actually was.

THAT was IT....? *shakes head disapointed* Don't you think that was a lame end??? Come on make some more........