rate_review Reviews

I'm totally confused. Honestly, I didn't really like what was here at this point, but that's because I'm lost in what's going on. I think I would really enjoy the story but I'm just too confused right now. It looks like there were also some formating errors when you posted, and maybe that's why I'm so lost. Or it could be that you have the questions answered later on and just haven't posted them yet.
Keep writing! You've got something good.
Elendilsheart