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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

great stry, but i was just wondering were chapter 1 was?

That was a ghood story you need to up date very soon

I have to say that this was a very intresting story. I enjoyed it on a sexual and originality levels. Keep up with the writing you are very good. The Dark Angel

Great Fanfic.

Excellent story, This is so sad, i almost cried poor paige, im so glad that piper and everyone one find out, now no one will get hurt again. =)

I loved the idea. I'd always hoped the theme would have been darken when Paige saw into Cole and the others didn't. But it hadn't and that was a downer. So, reading this definitely let me see how others would have explored that idea. And I do believe you got a lot of the symptoms in but ris nis not something someone forgets easily especially if it had been going on for more than a month...I think you said two or something like that. Maybe three. Paige would have had serious issues with either Pheobe or Leo touching her for a 'very' long time. Pheobe because maybe she might subconsciously blame her or because she was in some way in relation with Cole, think Pheobe then her fiancé Cole. Or Leo because he’s a male and most rape victims fear the sex of their rapist long after and some never get over it. I’m saying that just because Cole had been found out by Leo does not make it easier for Paige and I was rather disappointed to see it wrapped up so easily. I do expect that there is another chapter to come or maybe more explanation and helping Paige get over her pain but it wouldn’t surprise me if there wasn’t. These are the things that make the difference between bad fiction and good fiction. I tried to word it as nicely as I could in a helping way but I have no idea if I seceded. You’ll have to be the judge to tell me that. I did love how you had Piper and Leo so protective and the ‘very’ smart idea of using place cards to keep Paige away from Cole. That’s probably what stood out most and was the determining factor that I would write this review. But other than wanting more of a recovery for Paige and acknowledgment from her sisters and Leo, it was a great dive into that dark side of what might have made them snap to and take notice instead of Pheobe’s pregnancy and her becoming the Queen of the Underworld.

THIS IS AWSUME!!!!GREAT STORY!!!....email me when u update it!

Interesting storyline and ideas. You might want to get a beta just to doublecheck spelling and grammar/punctuation stuff. Other than that, good job. Nice to see someone taking advantage of the NC-17 rating for something other than pure smut (nothing against pure smut...but sometimes variation is a good thing :) ).

OMG this is sooooooo good!!!!! plz do more soon!!!