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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was wonderful!! it was very well written, and i love the format you used! and the line "when i touch you, do you feel me?" is really interesting, and i think it adds so much feeling to this poem. great job!! keep up the great work!! (^_^)
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January 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It was short and wonderfully written.