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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You need a beta, bad. Not only was this story disturbing, but I could barely read some parts of it. Half written sentences and paragraphs left and right. Words that don't make sense. Please beta before posting another story.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i missed an anal sex part
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't quite get it... there wasn't really much left to the story. It was a one-shot -- Neelix did what he wanted and that was it. A sequel would be more of the same, unless you saw something that I didn't...
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm not even going to finish this. you have a twisted sick mind.