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Actually, Native Americans have no problem with homosexuality. They call us two spirited, and are completely accepting, unless they've embraced white religion.

Darn, I really wanted to like this. I know it's being done first person, but the little glitches and the changing of tenses, past to present to past, etc etc, are too distracting. I love the C/P 'ship, no question of that. What little I read, I think you nailed them really well. Please, fix the typos, settle on a tense (I personally prefer past-tense, esp if it's first person as this is), and I'd love to come back and finish this.

wow....HOT HOTTER HOTTEST!!!!
Great story, looooooved it.

I really enjoyed this. Good job!