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for His Heart

by GrumpyWriter

person jupisap
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nooo!!!! this story kicked ass!!! im soooo saddd right now~ ::sigh:: i guess it could b positive in a way too.. u can write more for ur other stories~ thats a plus.. but still.. u ended it!!!! how could u!! atleast the ending was fantastic!! i LOVED it!!! poor chris!! he had to kill his own father!! well, since u ended this story, please wreite more for present and puppet.. especially present!! i lthatthat story!!
person KaNdY
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its over!!! y????!?!?!?! this story was the best!!!!! well, all ur stories are the best.. but still!!! this story was sooo good!! to make up fndinndin this story, i hope u write tons more for present and playtime!! k?? im not too upset about this story endin though because the endin was fabulous!! hehe~
person brooke
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!! that was one hell of an endin~ aww... poor chris.. i cant blieve leo tried to kill his own son!!! it was sad that chris had to kill his own father~ this story will b hard to let go.. but im sure u'll write more stories so ill b lookin for them~
person Janice
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderful ending to an incredible story~ im not too sad that this story is over becuase u still have two fantastic fics out there and i kno u'll probably write more~ this was an incredible story and ill prob. read it again soon becasue it was so good~ hahaha..
person ashlee
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww~ its over? that was such a sad/sweet ending.. sad becfause chris had to kill leo, but sweet because of the wyatt/chris moment.. i loved this fic.. im realli realli realli sad to see it over.. but the endin was so good.. it was a good place to end this story.. but still, it was such a great fic!! i hope u start writin more for ur pther two since u finished this one.. keep the other two goin for a loong time though~!
person Kendal
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh!!! u ended it!! noooo~~!!! this was mai favorite fic!!! i loved it!! nooo!!! this whole fic was great and will b greatly missed... the last chapter was the best!! i loved the ending to this story.. but im still sad that it ended... i hope u write another story soon.. and PLEASE dont end ur other stories!
person churio
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought that was a perfect time to end this story, and u did an excellent job with the last chapter.. ill b readin ur other stories!!
person churio
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another chapter! yay! i realli realli enjoyed this chapter! nice work with the detail! it was great! waitin for ur update!!
person Ashlee
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yea, this site has been goin through some troubles.. im glad u updated though! the chapter was absolutely perfect! i hope this site keeps workin so u can post more!
person janice
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved it like always~ when r u gonna update ur other two stories?? i cant wait to read those! i guess il have to b patient.. but its jus so hard!! hehe

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