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by GrumpyWriter

person Jenzila
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wha...? End? No...NOOOOOO!!! This should have just been a never-ending story of sex and angst!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
person lillibelle
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't hide. I for one love angst. This was an amazing story. I loved Chris initiating contact and how it all spiralled out of control. Great story.
person HotFan
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eh, well not really how I thought it would end, but it's not that bad. I guess you could always make a sequel to that with Chris's revenge or something like that. Still super extremely good story though. You're awesome. I'll be waiting for more from you...
person heather
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU!! Poor chris, I even feel sorry for Wyatt, Please write a sequel or somethng to fix this. Or least make it so Wyatt suffers alot.
person ashlee
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh!! u ended it!!! nooo!! how could u??write a sequel or sumtin!! please!! atleast u have ur other 2 stories... but it would b awesome if u wrotsequsequel here!!
person ~*KaM*~
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u finished the story!! im glad u wrote more, but im sad that u ended it!! i was hopin to read more! do i possibly c a sequel in the near future?? perhaps... hahaha.. cant wait to read ur other 2 stories.. but a sequel would b nice... ^_^
person dominique
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
itz over!!! wat??? already?? y?!?! couldnt u of written atleast one more chapter??? ::sigh:: atleast u still hab 2 other stories going on that hopefully will go on for a loooonnngg time.
person janice
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a great endin!! poor chris!! that was absolutely fantastic!
person SpRiNgEr
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::applause:: that was great!! im just sadd that it had to end!! iughtught u were gonna write more!! when i saw the "end" i was like 'WAT?!?!?!' i have to admit, im sad to c this story over...
person a*v*a
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just found this story and read it all.. it was inbelievably awesome! hahaha.. that was a good endin! but it was kinda of a cliffy.. so maybe a sequel?? wel, datz the vibe i got so maybe im wrong.. ur the writer, itz up to u~

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