rate_review Reviews

Okay, so I'm reading a really great story and I hit next chapter thinking that I'll be reading chapter 2. Only to find out that it's really chapter 10. Okay, that's fine, I pull down the chapter list and find chapter 2 and I continue reading this really great story. Same with chapter 3. When I go to read chapter 4, I ended up with chapter 5. So, I pull down the chapter menu again and go looking for chapter 4. Except, I can't FIND it! Now, as I said, this is a really great story and I would love to read it in it's entirety. Especially since I am a huge fan of both The Dead Zone and The Sentinel. I will be checking back periodically to see if it's been fixed. This is not intended to be nasty towards you, but just to let you know that I found it a little confusing the way that it is now (now being June 2, 2015).

really good story but chapters 4 and 8 are missing, it is supposed to be in 17 parts right? not 18? liked it and your other story with Harry, but you shouldn`t use one scene over and over ;-)

if that is your attempt in a cliffie, you suck

very good story, expect for one problem-- it cuts off at the end. read your own chapters right at the end and you see what I mean.

Can't you fix that? it's quite irrating..

This was good, but is it supposed to cut off in mid sentence like that?