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by GrumpyWriter

person Dominique
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahaha.. sry.. i was just curious.. ne ways~ that was great! just perfect!! y do u need a bouncer? all ur ideas and stories have been perfect!!! i cant wait to find out wat happens next to wyatt and chris!! this story is gettin soo good!! i want more please!!
person SpRiNgEr
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww~ poor chris!! so wyatt does have a gentle side to him after all huh?? loved the details. they were great!! hope to see another post verrryyy soon!
person ~*holly*~
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh!!! i loove readin ur updates and ur chapters because they are fantastic, but then when it ends, it just makes me want more!!!! and then i have to wait a few days to read it!!! um dyin to read more!! so chris is rememberin again despite wyatt's spell? hmm.. i see alot to come in future chapters!~
person janice
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heyy~ i would love to help u, but im writin something of my own right now, and im tryin to finish it.. but if i do ever have time, ill let ya kno.. but i dunt understand y u need help.. all ur chapters and writing is sooo incredibly good! i wish i could write like!! dunt feel insecure.. trust me.. wateba u like, everyone will love! i speak for all of us! so write away!!
person xfaytx
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amzing! im enjoyin this story sooo much!! its great!! i would say its my favorite, but all ur stories are my favorites! hahaha.. they are alls o good! ne wayz.. love where this is going!! so chris is gonna remeber.. wat effects could that cause.~
person Sophie
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!
Please, Please, Please write more.... i want to find out what wyatt does to mike.

Thank you for writing it..... WRITE MORE PLEASE
person j.t
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey~ u didnt update yet!! hmm.. guess ur bz.. ill b waitin for u next update!!
person ashlee
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes~ u finally updated!! i hope u update this story a lot more because it is my favorite!! wow, a three s? ho? hott~ cant wait for more~
person ~*holly*~
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another chapter! yes! thank you!! that was another excellent excellent fantastiv, unbelievably great chapter~ hahaha.. all i can ask for is more!!
person Dominique
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more!! that was awesome! propz!! i cant wait till the next chapter! wat would wyatt do to make chris angry enough to go back.. wow~ this story has a lot of things to come from when i read the summary..whens the n/c part?? i didnt read it.. or maybe thats wat happens to make chris madd?? hmm.. i wonder..

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