rate_review Reviews

This story was wonderful and so amusing! You captured the characters well.

I don't know why you'd expect hate mail, the entire story was brillant. I almost feel sorry for the Centere, especially Lyle and Raines, note I said almost. I hopet tht the story's continued.

I *loved* this story. I think this is the first thing I've read of yours (if you've written other things, that's what I'm going to search for next), and I am now truly a fan. I think you portrayed the characters just perfectly, and I loved the scene when Bambi realizes she's MP. But one of my favorite parts wasn't even part of the story. It was the description at the end of the story as to why you wrote it and I totally agree with you on all of the points that you made.

Fabulous job. I will definitely be reading your work from now on. :)