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LOVE the story, but since I am an anal Skid Row fan, I have to point out that there was no way Chris would have been wearing a Skid Row Tee shirt the first time he saw Lorelai naked since that would have been 1984 at the latest, and Skid Row did not release their first Album "Skid Row" until January 24, 1989. Thanks.

This is a really great story, I hope that you'll update it soon.

Come back! I'll buy you flowers, candy, cars, whatever. Just please finish this story. My little heart breaks a little every day I come here and find that you haven't updated it yet.

Dude, this is a really, really good fic. I can't wait to read more. You've got the relaysh down perfectly and I love the inner voices in Lor's head. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!

I think I might love you! And want to have your babies. Okay maybe not since I don't like kids, but maybe offer lewd sexual favors so you'll keep writing this fic cause OMG IT SO ROCKS!!!!!! It's absolutely perfect, in character, in voice, the pep talk, the accidentally fondling Luke's crotch, her in his clothes, the multiple voices in Lorelai's head that we all know are there. The quarter to 1 in the morning declaration that kept me up till quarter after 5 reading! I'm DYING for more!!! GREAT FIC!!! I wish this had happened in the epi (which of course it wouldn't've uz of censors but a girl can wish *S*) Write more so I don't die of withdrawal?!?! Pleeeease?!?!? :)

ohhh keep going, its really good ;)

I can't believe you ended it there, thats like pure evil. i'm so happy that she has realized how she feels though, i hope that he responds positively and that she doesn't back out. Can't wait for the next part!

YAY! You cannot imagine my delight in seeing that you have updated this story. It keeps getting better and better. Please finish it. Please, please, please. Oh yeah, and write many, many more.

Wow this story is realy great. I love how you have Lorelai havingconversatios with herself in herhead , they are just so funny. You are so great telling everything from her POV. Can't wait for the next part!

sassyplatypus...PLEASE finish this story. It is spectacular! Are you sure you're only 19? Check your ID again. I'm waiting...
Seriously, you have the voices and the rythym down pat. Can we just make Nicole disappear (ASP sure did) and make what happens next NOT adultery? Anyway, I don't care. Let them get it on. Let them kill Nicole and hide the body. Let Rory shave her head and join a convent. JUST FINISH THIS STORY!!