rate_review Reviews

This is a fun story, but there is a lot of repetition that isn't necessary, for example, the conversation that Deanna has with Anita is exactly the same as the conversation Picard has with her, right down to their thoughts. I also got confused as to how Anita suddenly became Beverley. It seemed as though you started one story then ended with another. Still great fun though. I've also used the holodeck fantasy in my Picard story and I love the variations a holodeck programme can give.