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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LIKE WOW TOTALLY FANTASTIC :) CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE :) YOUR A TERRIFIC STORY WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW LOVE THIS STORY :) IT WAS 'SO' GOOD I JUST READ ALL NINE CHAPTERS :) THEY WERE GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON :) AND A SERIES WOULD BE TOTALLY FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I totally forgot to say I think the visiter is prue :)
PS: great story :)
PS: great story :)
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes! ive been havin problems with the site too! ne ways, great update! short, but still excellent! can i say this enough, but "Poor Chris!" cant wait to see the identity of the women!! more please!
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im soooo sorry it took me so long to review! i read it like a couple of days ago, but the review button wouldnt work and it just frusterated me to no end! i wrote a looong review and now its gone! ne ways, loved the reacton of the family~ sounds like wat piper would do for real! whose the angel who is gonna sweep down and rescue chris from wyatt's evil grip?? well find out if u update so more please!
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww, this chapter was too short! it was so good that i wanted it to go on for more!! haha, i guess it keeps me on the edge and more eager for ur next update, right? hahaha.. yeah, this site has been havin its ups and downs. u were great in writing all the emotions out in this chapter, realli well written! and there was a cliffy at the end! who is that women? the identity will be revealed!!!
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh!! who is it? im thinkin bianca becasue she has long dark hair, but i dunt think its her... hmm... ahh! the suspense is killin me! i loved this chapter! thought it was great! now write the next one please!!!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you could really use some paragraphing. it's hard to read.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was the best so far in my opinon... it made me want to cry because i just felt so horrible for chris!! knossos and then wyatt!! but im lovin all the drama! wonder wat piper is gonna say about wyatt~ always lookin forward to more!
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! poor chris!! this chapter was so intense and filled with drama/suspense and i LUVED it!! when trent found chris in the shower, it was so sad! havin to sleep with wyatt for his lover! i cant wait to see how the family reacts to this! more please!