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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please a new chapter...Add the others brothers...
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want more please...I want a new chapter, I love it
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pure smut, plotless, and a bit shallow. It's great if you like that kind of thing. I don't. Good sentence fluency and not bad word choice. Needs a bit more voice. Keep writing!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
get chris and jack in there!