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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, it feels Jay got just what he wanted. This "T" mark means he's been branded as Tim's property?
What a bunch of supernatural rapists-stranglers lurking in the night. But what attracts them? obviously, aroused potential victims watching tapes of previous rapes, I guess. I wouldn't mind watching some real YouTube video like this one myself, everything's described so.. vividly, the Slenderman's appearance is given not as a whole but by scary details. Still I wish you described his head.
An assailant asking for water after the attack then asking to spend the night.. :)
A standard situation in rape fanfiction stories: a rapist who knows what and how he wants, and a quite horny victim who's "torn", not knowing if he should welcome the guy or fight back.. but the second isn't an option, how convenient :)
Jay's a bit too quick to kiss back and enjoy the actions he was so terrified of just a couple of lines above, and Tim becomes strangely gentle, almost timid and - remorseful, like a child.. oh my:) And then he says: "I just got excited", "I wasn't in control of myself" - :)
And, to top it all, the rapist l-l-loves his victim. That simple :) Oh those glorious rapes in fanfiction :)
To sum it up, the beginning was more interesting and intriguing than the practically standard ending with not-so-unwilling victim.
What a bunch of supernatural rapists-stranglers lurking in the night. But what attracts them? obviously, aroused potential victims watching tapes of previous rapes, I guess. I wouldn't mind watching some real YouTube video like this one myself, everything's described so.. vividly, the Slenderman's appearance is given not as a whole but by scary details. Still I wish you described his head.
An assailant asking for water after the attack then asking to spend the night.. :)
A standard situation in rape fanfiction stories: a rapist who knows what and how he wants, and a quite horny victim who's "torn", not knowing if he should welcome the guy or fight back.. but the second isn't an option, how convenient :)
Jay's a bit too quick to kiss back and enjoy the actions he was so terrified of just a couple of lines above, and Tim becomes strangely gentle, almost timid and - remorseful, like a child.. oh my:) And then he says: "I just got excited", "I wasn't in control of myself" - :)
And, to top it all, the rapist l-l-loves his victim. That simple :) Oh those glorious rapes in fanfiction :)
To sum it up, the beginning was more interesting and intriguing than the practically standard ending with not-so-unwilling victim.