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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This one had me rolling around and stuffing both hands in my mouth in an attempt to not wake the whole building with demented cackling. I love reading your Mary Sues, and I usually make point of avoiding them like the gorram plague.
Only one little, eensy problem: there seems to be bits missing. Like between chapters 10 and 11. The end of chapter 10, your (very entertaining, rather endearing, and not-at-all annoying) Scribe is alone in a room, then in the beginning of chapter 11, she's all of a sudden in a tub with the J boys, talking to Ares. I'm not demanding Graphically Detailed Descriptions of Triplet Sex!tm But maybe a reposting of the missing chapter or something?
Also, in part 12, the part with the actual prophecy is missing. It goes from,
'I wiggled a finger in my ear. "Hey, Thunder--did anyone ever tell you that you could draw more attention with a whisper than a shout? Still, I suppose it would make sense to get down to the nitty-gritty." Silence. Stares. "Hey, a new record for me! I managed to confuse everyone'
to
'Mistress of the Web."
"Semantics, semantics. Yer on Olympus."'
I really, really enjoy your writing, but the way AFF.net mangles the text sometimes makes reading it difficult. I know there's probably not a whole heck of a lot you can do about it, and that you're probably busy cranking out more wonderful stories and living an actual, y'know, LIFE, but could I humbly, sweetly, pretty-please-with-sugar-free-cocolate-covered-Brendan-twins-on top request a reposting or something? *bats invisibly blonde dratitall eyelashes*
Only one little, eensy problem: there seems to be bits missing. Like between chapters 10 and 11. The end of chapter 10, your (very entertaining, rather endearing, and not-at-all annoying) Scribe is alone in a room, then in the beginning of chapter 11, she's all of a sudden in a tub with the J boys, talking to Ares. I'm not demanding Graphically Detailed Descriptions of Triplet Sex!tm But maybe a reposting of the missing chapter or something?
Also, in part 12, the part with the actual prophecy is missing. It goes from,
'I wiggled a finger in my ear. "Hey, Thunder--did anyone ever tell you that you could draw more attention with a whisper than a shout? Still, I suppose it would make sense to get down to the nitty-gritty." Silence. Stares. "Hey, a new record for me! I managed to confuse everyone'
to
'Mistress of the Web."
"Semantics, semantics. Yer on Olympus."'
I really, really enjoy your writing, but the way AFF.net mangles the text sometimes makes reading it difficult. I know there's probably not a whole heck of a lot you can do about it, and that you're probably busy cranking out more wonderful stories and living an actual, y'know, LIFE, but could I humbly, sweetly, pretty-please-with-sugar-free-cocolate-covered-Brendan-twins-on top request a reposting or something? *bats invisibly blonde dratitall eyelashes*
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i feel like a chapter was misplaced between part 10 and 11 ... because Scribe goes from locking herself in the bedroom in Aphrodite's temple to sitting in a hot tub and needing Ares to hand her a towel. ... i really enjoyed this story though.
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July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks ever so much.
Oh, that's me up there. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Feel free to yell at me when you post something else. I'm sure I'llinteinterested
in reading it. (*snort* Like I'm not secretly begging in my mind.)
CybrEmly
Oh, that's me up there. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Feel free to yell at me when you post something else. I'm sure I'llinteinterested
in reading it. (*snort* Like I'm not secretly begging in my mind.)
CybrEmly
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*makes big, sad begging eyes* Please continue this 'un? It makes me giggle. I just know
it'll have a great big smash and then the denoumont. (I hope I spelled that right- I'm not too
great with french.)
CybrEmly
it'll have a great big smash and then the denoumont. (I hope I spelled that right- I'm not too
great with french.)
CybrEmly
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is awful..... Gimme more!!
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughs her head off* Scribe, you are the Goddess of Self-Insertion. This is incredibly hilarious and love. br. bravo!
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June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great and funny story. Scribe, the main character, is very comical!! I was reading this story when it was on Fanfiction.net, however it wasn't finished yet. I hope you finish it , Sc, Scribe.