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for Lizzie Learns (remake)

by LilBitch666

person Angel21
schedule June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up II don't know um put miranda and brian together and put Lizzie and Gabe togather that will work!
person melody
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey its ok so far i wanna noe how it ends
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person Angelique
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's ok you review whenever you can and if it's ok with you you can writh to my e-mail enywas I liked this chapter but when does Lizzie finally lern with Gordo?
Love Angie
person Angelique
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I forgott Thanks for telling me the mining of Snoging thingy.
person melody
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey jade
i luv wat u done wid it but......its missin sumthin u noe wat i mean?
well peaces
person Angelique
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think tyhat was just sick i mean whay the hell did he have to get her drunk he used her that is so not like Gordo I hate it that little ditail but I have to admott it di turn me on. Though i still dont get wat its snoging?
Love angie keep writing Oh and read my story Lizzie's True love and review as I did with yours
person melody
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jade, u got sucha mad good story, i can't wait until I can read what's gonna happen next. Gordo is such a perv, but i also really wanna know what happens or at least happened between Desmond and Miranda!
person Matt
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This... story rules. may may make one sugestion though, be more detailed on the sex scenes
person Matt
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u know Jen, i was juust messin, i was just rapping on u, and btw good job =)
person Angelique
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wat's Snoging? Oh and keep writing please
Love angie

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