schedule
May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....well, to be perfectly honest, there's a lot of spelling and grammar errors. I found it difficult to follow at times because of that, but otherwise, you're story was funny. A little gross at the ending...but funny.
Good job. Work on the spelling and grammar, and it'll be a lot better for readers, and easier for them to follow.
Good job. Work on the spelling and grammar, and it'll be a lot better for readers, and easier for them to follow.
schedule
June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!