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for The First Date Theory

by CTorresBarreda

person Rica
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is your first foray into smut? Awesome first time (pun intended) for Grissom and Sara and for you as well. The detail is amazing. He remembered that she's a vegetarian. Setting it up like they are already dating to overcome those "first date" awkward moments... brilliant.

I love this line: "The night was long any way, and they’d already conquered it." Yes, conquer it they did.

I sure hope you continue to write erotica! :-)

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