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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written story! I refuse to believe that it's your first try at this genre :-)
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sensual and well-done for a masturbation story. You have a dare I say it? Feel for the subject! The only suggestion I have is to tie it a bit more closely to character--for the first three chapters it literally could be ANY woman, in ANY fandom. More detail about what she's fantaaizing would have been welcome!
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This subject isn't always handled tastefully, but you managed to do so, all the while keeping it insanely hot. Awesome stuff.