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for Don't Move

by audrarose

person Lianna
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Next time you have to let me watch."

They're not fooling Sheba. Not for a moment. But it's nice that she doesn't mind.

Having someone suffering from the cold and someone else having to use body heat to warm them up is such a shash cliche, but you made it fresh by incorporating Sheba into the story. Great job.
person Maevenly
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was WONDDERFUL! The way yo laid the backstory with just enough hint of love and mutual respect. That was lovely.ANd - to have you follow it up with mutual desire - that was a great spin! WHOOOHOO! I really loved it!
person Syble
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Sweet, loving and incredibly HOT. I'm with Sheba, next time I want to watch - again. ;P I hope there will be a next time!

Syble
person Anna
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this when you posted it on BSGslash, and I love it rereading it again now. I have so seldom been made to like Sheba, and that I do here is testament to your skill! The second part, from Starbuck's POV, is so slow and sensual and satisfying that I'm sitting here typing with a very silly grin on my face. Lovely. Want more!

Anna

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