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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just finished the second chappie and I am so lovin' this story!!! Not only is this one of the best written fics that I have read on this site, but it has my two favorite couples just beginning to REALLY get together!!! Please continue, you are doing an awesome job!!!
I also like the way you wrote about the Athosian(did I spell that right? Well I'm sure ya get the idea!! LOL!!!) culture. You put a good deal of detail into how they have all integrated beautifully together and accepted each other. Absolutely magnificent!!!
I also like the way you wrote about the Athosian(did I spell that right? Well I'm sure ya get the idea!! LOL!!!) culture. You put a good deal of detail into how they have all integrated beautifully together and accepted each other. Absolutely magnificent!!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are so mean!!! Damn cliffies!!! LOL!!! Great chapter though!!! Teyla quoting Doc Holiday was truly inspired!!! I like the idea about the fruit being an aphrodesiac!!! That was great!!! She so totally planned that!!! And poor John walking around hard 90% of the time!!! Ha ha I thought that that was freaking great!!! Every chapter is kick ass so far, I can not wait for the update!!! Please do so soon!!!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i totally think tayla and john are meant for each other
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great; I really hope you continue it! McWeir and Sheyla are definitely my favorite pairings on Atlantis :)
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a great first chapter! you write wonderfully well. i hope you update soon. ta mya.