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for Love and Pain

by betsanne

person dime
schedule November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how many times I've read this story by now. Must be at least a dozen.
It's not even that the wording is particularly artistic, or the plot very realistic, but somehow you manage to put things exactly the right way to have a major impact. You write strong emotions really well. And I'm not even a Smallville fan, dammit! ;D (Though this fic caused me to watch a number of episodes to get to know the characters a little.)
Too bad this isn't on FFN anymore, I found that site more comfortable. And I don't believe for one second that they'd actually go through their billions of fics and check which ones comply with what guideline. *eyeroll* Ah well, your choice. As long as it's still up somewhere. ^^ Because I like re-reading it every once in a while, and not only when I'm home and have all my own copies available. ;) I really, really like this one.
- Dime

person Iras
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wally West and John Stewart.... I haven't read many DC/Marvel comics recently... but I am thinking Flash and Green Lantern, if my memory does not decieve me.

Yay CLex pwns... so angsty, but it had a happy ending, so all is well
person Sara
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was such a beautiful and heartwrenching story.
I'm glad I found this fic.
person Mu-chan the Vampire King
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!WOW!!!!!!!
person dazz_teddybear
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My GOD!!!! I think I'm in love with you now....This is my favorite smallville story ever!!!

I loved Clark and Lex fights(and all the passion too eh eh) please write more, I'm officially your fine now.

If you have a website or if you update a new story please contact me!!!
person kwlguy
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg one of the best stories i have read its really good i loved it wow i give kudos to this right on
person Sailor Aurora
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man, that was such a nice story. well, some parts weren't so nice but you get the idea.
I love it! if you ever made other stories such like this one, email me and let me know! I'd love to read your other stories. :)
person twiglet
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! What a great story!

You write the characters and the plot really well, and the I love the way you've made the story into just one chapter. It's frustrating when a story is only half-written (for the author too - I'm halfway through writing a HP/DM Harry Potter fic, and posting has become too eratic that I'm just gonna write the rest and post a chapter a day once it's finished - Merlin only knows when that will be!)

Keep writing - whether it's a sequel to this story or another one entirely different!

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person Anon
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew. That was nice!!

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