rate_review Reviews

I loved how in character this was. Adrian was a crazy, jelous, mixed-up bastard and I could absolutly see him doing something like this. A little short in the sex but still very nice.

i hate to admit it but this is a really inspired piece of work. i love it as a one shot. i also think you should add more chapters because i adore adrien/matt and everyone else has seemed to ignore that coupling. if it is a one shot you should write some more...like twelve.

Holy shit dude. That was messed up. I liked it. It was feral, in a way. Nice feel; very dark. 5/5.

Wow. You just wrote exactly what I thought when I watched that epiode! I loved it! More! More!

ah I really love your fanfic. i love nip/tuck and cannot wait for the new season. but anyway great job

One of the things that bugged me watching the show was that somehow NOone actually listened when Adrien pretty much *told* them that Ava had been screwing him (since he was 12)...Julia and Sean when to confront Ava and *still* missed the freakiing boat, focusing more on the so-called adoption crap Ava spouted. Anyway, my point is that I LOVED the fact that you sort of kept that obliviousness in it. Matt was so focused on the "this dude wants to do me," that he *missed* the part about the Ava/Adrien sex. While reading I had to pause thinking, "Dang, even in the *story* incest doesn't even make these people blink." This still felt like the show to me. And so, you rock.

Oh, added bonus: I liked the idea of the two of them together anyway, even if for one night of angry sex, lol. I *wish* the show would've gone there...or at least have Matt question an attraction to Ava *and* her sone. ^_^

I LOVE that scene and I LOVE that couple!