rate_review Reviews

Very good.

beautiful work. i am struck. the way you captured frank was absolutely wonderful. i don't think you slipped from his character at all. and what really got me was how you captured frank's homelife - how he was an abused child and his relationship with his wife. it was eye-opening and a compassionate handling of both characters.

all in all, i loved it. ^_^ nice work, dear.

ps - i wouldn't mind seeing more work from you.

VERY good! You really opened frank up in a brilliant way and kept them both in character. BRILLINT!

A good serious story you got here. Captured the emotion perfectly, doubt that I could do better myself.