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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice little PWP smut fic, and it's clear you love the characters by the way you've worked at keeping a sense of romance within the sensuality. If this is one of your first attempts you're doing very well. It's not easy to do a first person point of view, particularly Grissom's but it was a good attempt and added a great deat to the story.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smutty and beautiful. Well Done.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. I hope you continue to write more. Perhaps you can add chapters to this in an effort to make it a story as opposed to a one-shot smut-fic. Not that there is anything wrong with a one-shot smut-fic. Trust me. You've done well.
Also, your author notes say you're not from America. I am an editor for another fan-fiction writer and have read many stories on different websites. Suffice it to say that you do not have a problem with the language. You've done better than many other stories I've read from people who have English as their first and/or only language. Thank you, you're a wonderful writer.
Also, your author notes say you're not from America. I am an editor for another fan-fiction writer and have read many stories on different websites. Suffice it to say that you do not have a problem with the language. You've done better than many other stories I've read from people who have English as their first and/or only language. Thank you, you're a wonderful writer.