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for OH! BROTHER!

by Conrad32

person Anon
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Seven inches limp? So he's what, 20 inches hard? Really defying the laws of physics, eh?

I can see from your email address that you are a Xena fan. YOU HAVE BROUGHT SHAME TO XENITES EVERYWHERE!
person Chris
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The words are there, the action is ok, but the layout and punctuation is crap, which makes it a bummer to read. Get your layout sorted into the usual boring but standard paragrahs, with proper punctuation, longer sentences and a few verbs, and we're off.
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
right...
person M
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to state for the record that I detect no talent.Typos can be overlooked, as can simple screw-ups a few times, but I'm sorry: p.u.n.c.t.u.a.t.i.o.n and CAPITALIZATION are sorta necessary to not make people retarded. I feel stupider now that I've read this.

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