rate_review Reviews

At first I was curious about a Kate/Sun slash. It isn't a pairing that has any canonical basis, nor does it seem likely but it's an interesting idea right? Not in this case. Two seemingly unconnected chapters written in a style that attempts elegance but betrays its very primitive origins. (Sun:"...luckily the kisses are soft and not leave me with a hickie..." Nuff said.) Confusing and amateurish, this is some of the weakest erotica I've encountered so far on AdultFanFiction.

please.. do continue

That was really sweet. Short yes. But I'm glad to see some fem-slash, ecspecially for Lost.

yay femslash