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Whew, that was excellent, as was Chapter One. Poetry in motion. Dying to know how this is going to go!

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This is incredibly good! I'm in awe of your writing, and a bit jealous myself; your words are poetry-turned-prose, your descriptions, your depictions of their thoughts and feelings, and their appearances, are spot-on. Characterization is incredible; if I didn't know the characters as I do, your writing would establish it all early on. I'm putting this in recommended reading, the second of only two! I did the first one earlier today; maybe the quality of writing on this site's improving? I hope? Any way, I'll be checking back regularly for updates, hope you don't keep us waiting. Awesome job!